I had no idea how creative and skilled my readers were in presenting their excellent thoughts on how to end my Miniature Golf Blog contest!

All of you who had the courage to enter are winners!

I am now going to respond to each winner, in my own time, in order of when they were received:

CMK:

This was well-though out and had lots of foreshadowing. I loved how you connected Mark with Maria at first with the watch and the mystery man in her dreams and then Mark with the memory of his great great granddfather and the necklace key! And now, the trip to the Cliffs of Moher. Great start to a story we would like to read. Thank you!

Danie:

I loved the energy and action your scene brought to me. Golf balls splashing in owner’s beer mug and running and jiggling and clearly having a great time and amazing date. This had powerful energy to absorb! Thank you for your very energetic entry. It made my heart race.

Mikalya:

I liked the image you gave us of the blowing short skirt and how you brought the astral plane into the date. I would love to hear more about that. And you brought in Suzy-Q! Excellent touch. He knew about my lovely but dangerous Suzy Q! Excellent and clever piece. Thanks.

Veronica:

Of course you didn’t call him that night. You purposely made him wait and wonder: Is she interested? And then a clever text… Of course he didn’t care about your golf score, but he cared about how the wind played with your skirt. Careless, for sure, but seems like a good decision. I appreciate this sexy and playful piece.

More winning submissions in a few days. Stay tuned!

Carson